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Fallingleaves

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PostSubject: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:19 am




Name:Brokenkit/Brokenpaw/Brokenstep/Brokenstar

Gender: Tom

Age: 28 Moons

Clan: Ivy Clan

Rank: Leader

Lives: 9 left (will be changing this depending on his lives)

Physical Description: Long dark grey fur and some white hints with Dark blue eyes with a hint of teal and loneliness.

Build: Large and lean, he is taller then few cats



Mental/Personality: Lonely, sometimes crazy from a head injury the medicine cat couldn't fix. He is out going and sometimes self centered.He cares for the well being of his clan, and sometimes fells like he has to shed blood to get what he wants.


History/Backstory: He was born when Thunder Clan attacked River Clan back in the old forest. His name Brokenkit came from what happened when a Thunder Clan cat took his paw and hit him against the nursery wall. His parents wanted to call him Stonekit in honor of his gray pelt, though after talking it over they came to a conclusion. As he was growing up the others kits made fun of him, the only friends he had were an apprentice named Stormpaw and his brother Blizzardkit named for his white pelt he got from his father. He then had a normal apprenticeship and warrior life, until a warrior accused him of murdering the clans deputy, Ripplewind to become deputy himself. Of course he didn't do it and the leader did not believe the warrior, and made Brokenstar then Brokenstep, from the way he walks as when an apprentice he  got his front left paw stuck between two boulders making it look like his paw is broken. He was then talked to by his Grandfather Stoneclaw, who lived in the dark forest. Brokenstep was persuaded to kill his own leader, at first he refused but then he was forced and persuaded to. When it was the clans time to move Stoneclaw was mad he had not yet killed the leader. Brokenstep replied that he would die soon anyways with greencough or old age. One day the leader, otherwise known as Shadestar collapsed as soon as they got to the new territory. Brokenstep held back that under the toms long dark gray fur were claw and teeth marks. The smell of blood still on his paws and small patches of red, still no one noticed. He wonders what he would have done if he could go back to when he was born, stop the Thunder Clan cat that messed his head up, and could set everything right. He wonders if anyone can or could figure out what happened that day, when Shadestar died.




Mother: Swiftstep- Young classic light gray tabby- Alive- Elder
Father: Whitepelt- Long white pelt with black legs-Dead- Star Clan
Grandfather- Stoneclaw- Long silver/dark gray fur, with white legs- Dead-Dark Forest
Grandmother: Winterwind- Long white fur, silver patches-Alive-Kittypet
Brother: Blizzardfoot- close to black gray fur with close to pure white leg- Alive- Warrior/Mentor
Friend(s): Stormeye- Light brown tabby with dark brown legs-Alive-Warrior
Creamwind- Cream fur with white patches-Alive-Warrior
Otterstep- Dark brown fur, light brown fur on chest and underbelly, longer underbelly and chest fur-Alive-Warrior


Crush: None.

Mate: He never had one, never will

Kits: Finds them a slight nuisance


Did Anyone Invite You?: Yes
If Yes Who/What?: Ravenshadows


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PostSubject: Re: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:32 am

Pretty Bio! Long Backstory there. I presume this your new character you told me about? Great character! Greenivy should be over soon to put you on the Ivy Clan members list!
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PostSubject: Re: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:35 am

Great Backstory! Added as Ivy Clans leader! First person to make their bio pretty bounce 
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PostSubject: Re: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 10:20 am

Thanks! and thanks for marking me down as the leader!
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PostSubject: Re: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 10:29 am

Detailed Bio! I see you are Ravens leader! Haha, they'll probably get along well.
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PostSubject: Re: Brokenstars broken past   Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:10 pm

I guess they will, Maybe He'll promote Raven. (Not saying I will.)
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